I'm the first

I let a dark shadow drape over the earth beneth me as I swooped down apon the grassy floor. Land on my hind legs I came down all the way letting out a call of anger and warning. No human could cetch me and I was very strong and swift. I was tall and sleek and powerfule as well. Looking for mares to meet I walked slowly forward folding my wings close to my sides. My great head turned so I my gaze could fall on a near by stream. I was on the top of a small mount of rock and looked down onto the others below. I then lay down to rest in the sun waiting for something intresting to happen-

The black and gold mare sighed heavilly, then flopped down onto the soft silver grass, taking a mouthfull and chewing it thoughtfully. It was so lonley here, there wasn't a horse for miles. Her soft downy wings covered her, the wind ruffling the golden feathers. She eventually stood back up, her dark eyes clouded lonliness. Of course, she was in heat, making her a vulnerable target for any male, but since there were none in the area, she didnt worry about her scent freely roaming for miles.

(Sorry so short)

(That's okay )

I stood up shaking my body and spotted a black main with a golden main and tail lying in the grass not far away. She had pwoerful golden wings folded agianst her body. I walked toured her curiosly. "Hello." I said standing a couple of yeards away. Re folding my wings I look at her wondering who she was?

Hearing a voice behind me, I jump, leaping into a defensive position, teeth bared and wings outspread. A large stud was standing behind me, looking harmless, but I didnt change my posture.

"No need to be frightened of me." I said. "My name is Flame most who don't know me call me Phenox." I said.

(Did you just make a seprate acounnt? I do that some times on my other sites so I can have an acounnt for my role playind and the other for staff stuff.)

(Yeah. Roleplaying with the Admin is a scary thing for newcomers.)
I let down my wings, but keep a close eye on him. "Well, Flame, Why are you here?" It was the usual question, and somthing just to fill in the silence.
(Ahh! SHort again!!)